Great!
Pretty awesome, I have to admit. The end made me laugh.
5'd because I recognize your abilties.
Great!
Pretty awesome, I have to admit. The end made me laugh.
5'd because I recognize your abilties.
Why thank you Typhlanar... One day I may put a real song of mine on here :)
Could be better.
Not bad, but I have some critisism.
- First, Maybe you should lay everything out so that its nice, don't make some things louder than others unless needed.
- Second, You should sort out some of your melodies so that they are in harmony, you have some mighty nice melodies, but they don't fit well together.
- Thirdly, your choice in synths and percussion, but they should all fit together. Don't take any offence in this, but the saw doesn't fit well with the choir and the flute thing you have going.
So overall, it wasn't bad, but it needs some major improvements that could help.
Hehe, thanks, I like constructive criticism ^^
- Well, I had to make drum louder to make some kind of effect...
You know, the bass from the drum takes over the melody!
I hope you got some real speakers & bass for your pc
when you're listening to this.
- Hmm.. Maybe you got a point.
- That is different from person to person.
Someone might like the combo of those instruments.
Thanks for reviewing :D awesome!
lolol
Maybe get rid of the donk bass... that is a start :P
Epic.
Whoa... This song shows TALENT. I love the saw you used, along with the vocals - where did you get those? Anyways, this is just great.
5/5
Dj-Typhlanar
What!?
All I have to say is... wow... purely epic... This is truely a great piece... *elipses*
Anyways, You are getting top 5 with this for sure if you havent already :P
Dj-Typhlanar
Haha
Haha, I remember redoing the Halo piano solo for this song.
For some background information, This song is based on a kid that Ultima doesn't like, no one really likes him. Most of the "Lyrics" in this song are real events, not made up.
BWAHAHA Did i also Say hes Fat? He weighs 234 Pounds ;D
Hes also retarded. he tried to ski up a hill
For sure~
I could easily see this with vocals of some kind!
Wanna sing? :P
LOLOL
Oddly enough, that melody sounds like Kr1z' Burning Summer melody.
Just thought I'd point that out, It's funny because I bet you didn't even mean to.
Look for Burning Summer, You will see the resemblance.
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