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Intro sounds like Distorted Reailty

Listen to B0UNC3's song Distorted Reality and you should see the comparison :P

As for the rest of the song, the main lead synths seem to overthrow the mix, but that's just me...
Overall, nice work :P

NEXUS WHORE

COSMIC COVERAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE

So overused. I would cut down on Nexus if I were you, many producers like myself find that it's unoriginal and boring because we've heard these same sounds a million times.

Find some other good VsTi and experiment with those, using presets that you can barely edit isn't necessarily a good way to go...

But nonetheless, your melodies are okay and don't seem very sour. Keep it up with melodies like that and you might be able to get somewhere xD

frifox responds:

hehe, this is a piece I made ~3 years ago, back when Nexus was the only VSTi I knew =P Now I try to use NI Massive / Vengeance more but Nexus is so dam easy to use that at times I just use it without even thinking. Bad habits are hard to stop =P

rthrtthr

The guy below me sucks cock, this song rocks.

I'M SORRY FOR THAT RHYME, GLAD I WASTED YOUR TIME, BUT YOU SHOULD PAY ME A DIME, SO I CAN REPEAT THAT CHIME

chazad123 responds:

WOOT YOU'RE AWESOME.

OW MY HEART

HNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

trololololo

so calming... MAKE MOAR

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Troll ololol? Lol. xD

I hoep to make moar!

wat

kltrhreg

Synths are nice, but the percussion needs a little bit more, uhh, boom? xD

they don't stand out as much as they do. Perhaps adding more bass to the kick and more high ends to the snare might make it stand out alot more.

Pretty nice overall.

I forget what I did, but meh aerlghokrh

RawGreen responds:

I've gotten a little bit more experience with DnB since I've uploaded this and I really see what you mean now. I've been keeping an ear out so that I can make sure to enhance it when I hear it needs to be.

rheh

Billy Cock

Holy hell.

Someone needs to make a flash out of this baby. You need to make more of these, maybe make a whole series of episodes for some lucky flash artist. I can really see something really epic coming out of this.

Your chord progression is weird...

I'd suggest staying on a certain key tone when you're working with melodies (B Flat Major/Minor, etc) and chord progressions. In this scenario here, your pads don't even sound like they follow your pad too well, if not at all. The lead is kinda displeasing too (It's just a sawtooth mixed with a pulse and it has a delay thrown on it) which kinda doesn't mix with the kick. The pad is okay, but it doesn't match your melody at all. Work on matching a pad to your melody, or vice versa.

Now on to the kick. Do your kicks usually sound like that? It sounds like you totally fucked over the high end with your EQing. and with nothing really going on with your kick, the whole mix kinda collapses. Your clap is kinda weird, it seems to just stick out there because it's the only thing without any real FX thrown on it to make it sound odd.

There isn't alot of deep bass in this mix too, which kinda ruins the overall spectrum of sound as well.

So that's my overall analysis. You get a 5/10, which is actually supposed to be used as a mediocre term it you look at it, and i'm giving you a 3/5.

THINGS YOU SHOULD FIX:
-Kick EQing
-Melodies/Chord progressions
-Lead synth
-Repetitiveness
-overall EQing
-etc.

Thanks for your time.

Darkfire96 responds:

This is very helpful! I probably should've stated that this is gonna be a long term project. I see that my fruity peak controller skills still suck, but i just learned this like 6 hours ago. I actually like the kick, i plan to add a bassline, and the EQing part...well it was late and i forgot XD. i see how the lead doesnt fit the lead, but the lead is 303 or something like that. Edited with a compressor. The melody itself was based off of Patrick Jumpen's, Holiday. It sounded awesome, and i honestly had this file since the beginning of time XD. Thats why it sucks now. Believe me i will update. I really appreciate a honest review. Maybe i should stop this song though and what until i finish my current one.
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